Kira Kira homework (P.E.E!) for the extra-long weekend!

For each Q, write at least 2 paragraphs in P.E.E format:
1. How has Lynn's character changed in chapter five?
2. How has Lynn and Katie's relationship changed in chapter five?

Writing Tips!

POINT:
Each point must show the CHANGE. Hence, compare both"before" and "after" character traits.
E.g. 1. While Lynn used to be (insert adjective/ specific description), she has become rather (insert adjective/ specific description) since becoming friends with .....

Alternatively, you may say she has become "more" or "less" of a certain character trait.
E.g 2. In chapter five, Lynn grows more vain than she was before becoming friends with Amber....

EVIDENCE:
While it's fine and good to cite evidence (which means just changing words in the book), you MUST also give some quotes (direct evidence in quotation marks) in an essay.

E.g. of citing evidence: Lynn suggested saving their pocket money to help their parents get closer to buying their own home.
E.g. of giving direct quotes: This was so that they would be "really" involved and "helping", rather than "just wishing" for it.

Notice that quotes are SHORT and impactful. Never quote long sentences.
Lastly, where possible, provide evidence for BOTH "before" and "after" characteristics.

EXPLANATION:
If you use lots of quotes and evidence, explain each one before going on to the next quote.

Sample paragraph structure: (Explanation is in pink)
In chapter five, Lynn, who used to be (insert adjective), has now become more (insert adjective). She used to think camping was "the most fun thing she ever did", showing her love of the outdoors and active personality. However, she now (insert evidence) because Amber hated it too. She would rather spend her time (insert evidence), showing that she has become more vain and would rather do more feminine activities instead.


Some words & phrases to describe relationships:

Feelings:
Trusting/ Loving/ Affectionate/ Strained/ Distant/ Has complete understanding/ Has misunderstandings/ Tense/ Mutual respect/ etc

Power/ Authority:
Equal in power/ One is more dependent on the other/ One has more power than the other/ etc

Role (function):
Leader-follower relationship/ Constant companions/ Is a teacher/ nurturer/ substitute parent to... / Is protective of/ etc


Do your best and have some time to rest and relax:)